nature?
hmm.. okay... let's make this fun. describe one incident where nature touched you in a positive way.. this can be things like watching a sunset, a rainstorm, watching the wind blow, etc. but--it has...
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I know I know.. couldnt help it.. I havent written a poem yet for this challenge.. but I had to post, try and gather up the team spirit amongst us or somethin.. I hope in what we post this time.....
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thanks james... i'm not too good at this "challenge" stuff, i never paid attention when i was on starlite... i agree, though, that we've all gone through a certain amount of pain to get to where we...
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don't worry, i'll definitely be posting, but it might not be too soon, heh, i've got a term paper due next week, on which i've done zip! i'll have one though.
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Morningfearing the daytrying to praywhy can't I find anything to believe inwaiting for the sunwatching it comefrom deep inside the ocean's skinwanting to seewhat's coming to mewill the new day bring...
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In darkness keep,With Sol asleep,The visions and dreamsSpread vast upon the breeze;In shadows creep,While nightmares weep,The thoughts and emotionsWhistling through the trees;In morning reap,From...
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that's so good, wes...........it almost takes your breath away......both in the work and in the reading....I don't know how you intended it to be read, but try reading it all as one long sentence or...
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Hey Wes (and everyone planning to enter the challenge)--I have to work tomorrow (Monday) night until about 9:30 my time (I'm in IL so I believe that's CST) so I won't be able to leave a verdict until...
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if i were to watch everything clawing at the road(trees, and dying twilight, and thick black clouds)the eerie emersion of hazy deadnight dreamsfrom the side of the roadi would see the speeding car,...
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okay.. jimis poem - beautiful.. I could clearly see the true intent of the poem... and the true veteran style about ya.. honed to a razor edge to bring at will.. gfpweses - well friend.. it has the...
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First, I must apologize for getting on so late. I had to work, sorry. Thanks to everyone who posted! ) I know my topic wasn't exactly the greatest. Jimi (Jimiiii)- Great poem. I got lost and didn't...
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good choice, LeA.....I too, thought Wes's poem was the best of the bunch......a truly emperically brief Starless Night work of magic and style...........congratulations Wes.........
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Wow... I didn't expect that at all... heh. Thank you much for the honor, NightEyes. It was a great topic, I am just sorry to see that there wasn't a lot of participation... though I can't say much to...
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lol, starless, that seems to be becoming a "saved in onyx" inside joke. "russian ice skater". but seriously now, you are very deserving of your "choseness".
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